dont worry, you are, and also your critique, is very welcome, i only can learn from other points of view
i also belive that some beginners can remember some things better than some advanced people 😉
and, more important, music isnt made for professionals , its made for everybody so everybody has a value opinion
.... so dont worry, i am glad that you took the time to think and write about it, thats why we do this here, dont we?
well breathing, 😉 one of my problems, you are right!
yes i should breath faster in and more steady out i guess, i should and will work on that, i play to little since i started guitar again
but i have to say about my breathing, that, part of my sickness, you know that i am quite sick for a long tiome already, is because of breathing, i even had an operation because of it and maybe need one more 🙁
i have such hard problems breathing that i even make (loud) noise when breath ( i tried not to make it on the recording)
it was better after i had lost 30 kilo but after changing medication i added 25 again and right now, i am always short on air
BUT not all my whistling problems are because of that, but maybe the whistle isnt even right for me but maybe it helps me train my lungs 😉
i want and should be able to handle this somehow, i have to work on it
anyway, when i did listen to my recdording i noticet, that i like the way i play but that some tones are not steady .... and that sound like very unaccurate, is it that what you mean?
about the rhythmn, the delay is not by accident
i did learn this tune since january (yes i am slow), and at least did think a lot about how to play it and the nicest versions i heard were sang songs, so i took the freedom not to take care of the rhythmn that much and make breaks where i would when singing
maybe thats ok, maybe bad, i dont know
But if it sounds bad to you, thats one point of view i should consider and hope i will get more
i do know that i hate or really never did play with metronom, always just by feeling, for a dance tune i would have to try to be accurate but for songs?
about the fingeringproblems, are there parts where you hear that i had those? i dont understand
so ... i realy should work on the tune much more, maybe i did think to much about how to play it and practise to little 😉 but i wanted finaly get a recording online ...another one will follow, i am sure